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Flyweight
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IP:
Start and finish were both tight. Some of the middle seemed a little off. I like your topic - commented on it myself in "Cud". Several very nice lines in there.
"gettin butt from the dreams that are wet don't count cuz all that's gonna happen is you gonna get kill by on-par vets and fucked like online starlettes."
Nice closer. Keep it up.
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