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Originally Posted by CrazyE
"Breath" stinks up this place , like a smelly fart in the food court
He could be spitting off da 1st Floor, but his words still fall short
Your Nothing to me , and you can't Spit a Rythme/Beat
Imma Fuck you so Hard , you'll be walking with Crows Feet
CrazyE
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CrazE - the second lines in those two lines i think completly messed you up the first one sounds like something an 8 year old would say and the second is just... gay. Other than that you had a good verse nicely structured alirght flow good punches just those two lines i thought threw you off.
Brethren - I think you took this one mostly with your punches, flow and great wordplay. Sometimes your lines where a little streached and threw off you structure but other than that great verse.
vote - Brethren
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