Aisle - first 2 bars didnt rhyme, dont care how u pronounce it it'd be a hell of a force.. bowling lane was really your only good line.. defenitely weak for a diss

Out - wack.. sorry kid, the rest even if they came wack have the foundation.. u got a simple rhyme scheme and horrible disses.. they shoulda left u out of this one, no offense

Feeble - a few decent multis, 2 good personals, rest seemed like filler with no good punches

Walter - had a different style from the rest, decent opener, and decent ending, but nothing in between seemed to hit.. need a more complex rhyme scheme

overall - not a bad diss, certainly not one that did damage, this is just an honest critque im not looking for beef, but from the name of cats considered "good" i was kinda disappointed in this, even i myself dont put much into open mics or disses i was still expecting more

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