Yo Wat up Won...
YWU= Nice Verse, Bad Structure, Decent Flow, Ok Punches, Enuff To Beat The Kid, Fix Your Damn Structure

Lol, And Take Away / At The End, Shorten Your Lengths, Your Consistency Was Ok, And Creativity Was Ok, Ok Vocab.
Proof= Okk Verse, Better Structure For Sure, Keep That Up lol, Decent Flow Aswell, But He Beat you On The Punches, But You Can Elevate Visit Tutorials. Your Consistency Wasnt There, Creativity Wasnt Good, Bad Vocab
Proof
Punches- C
FLow- B+
Vocab- B-
Creativity- C
Consistency- C
Overall Grade= C+
Yo Wat Up
Punches- B+
Flow- C
Creativity- B-
Consistency- B
Vocab- C+
Overall Grade- B
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