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Old 02-13-04, 12:39 AM   #10
M&rk
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ya like they said
vote- deacon

bone definately had his non rhymed words streched and this line
"the only time 'you left ur pc' was having you right hand molded in a cast
too self doubtfull..cuz i can read your mind like jean gray-in-the x-men//"
was your worst, u cant make fun of someone bout bein a nerd then turn around and quote the x-men, chummon

deacon, this rhyme definetly your best, was really good, but i might of heard it before from someone else i might be mistakin if so, real good line.
"Wanna beat me?...write my name on your dick and light some inscents"
that and your opener win this
both of you need ta work on rhymin shit wit a bigger vocab and make sense doin it,
like rhymin 18 with eighteen, dat aint coo, and other guy jus had a lot of bowl like that

vote- deacon

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