Lyrical MC obviously didnt read the battles at all... they both sucked but shorty sucked more.... most of the lines were just "blah blah i'll kill you", but at least BlackGrenade had one punch (the mother comment), one personal (playing shorties name) and self-glorified his own name one the last two lines... weren't very good but at least he actually had punches....

All shorty did was threaten him with guns and insult him for being black... and judging by his hyphens towards the end of the verse, i think he thought he was doing multies.... sorry, but they werent multies at all...

The only thing shorty did better was flow... some of BlackGrenades lines were stretched and didnt flow as well as they could have....

Overall, you should both fix up your styles, and start using some better punches and lyrics... try reading some books, especially the dictionary... broaden your mind and try writing about everything around you... hope my comments helped... peace

Vote = BlackGrenade