i get sick the time you takin...you fake bakin/
and your taking second, ill call you clay aiken//
my rhymes flo liek a river while u flo like a lake/

LoL..that Clay Aiken Line was Kinda Funny..but a lake doesnt flow, a river does..WTF LoL..

Bonez you hadda below average Verse. Your Ryme scheme wasnt that good, yet it flowed aight.
your punches were Mediocure in my opinion..Vocab was aight. You just threw me off after the Middle of your Verse..it didnt Come togethter like you wanted..

CASHVILLIAN..your not bad..you'd be a good battle..anyway..
your punches were much better then the other Kid's..
the personlas on his flow got me laughin..
your structure looks really good..dont know if its because of these
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But still, your verse was better in every catagory of Batteling...
Vote CashVillian...

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