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Old 02-13-04, 01:22 AM   #21
M&rk
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wordplay- the under rated, other cat looked ta only have rhymed 3 times in the whole thing,
muti's- under rated had one in his opener, and other cat didnt have any so...
punches-under rated, i like that maple leaf one cus i dont like cunnucks
flow- under rated, actually havin consecutive lines that rhyme help the flow, T west u need ta definetly work on that
meta's-under rated, actually had meta's instead of similies, dont see that too much, could tell u knew sumin bout battlin from that. ex. opener didnt use like or as.


T-west str8 up rhyme more in your battles, makes it worth reading, few good punches wit tha under rated and stay low punch there, kinda good wordplay wit it.

vote- under rated

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