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Old 02-13-04, 01:55 AM   #16
M&rk
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shit definetly not lopsided dis shits close,


killa kali

your a Baby Like Huey I'm playin your Game.. So getta Clue See
I could be Known as the Wackest Rapper, and still be better then You G
````good multi, but didn't tie in the baby huey thang wit the punch
I'm Curly so Sue Me and when i ask if your Wack.. your answeres Usually
Beat your Face Redder then a Ruby..Like a Bee Reproducin your the New-b
````good muliti, good wordplay wit the Curly sue, but agian weak punch
Un-CLEAR your Flows Misty Better yet described as the Word Mystical..
Your Blind to what Rap really is..so you cover it up with the name Lyrical
````not very good, wordplay didnt make up for the weak punch in this one
before i even posted your Swaying Just Like my Nuts Above You..
T-bag you suck dude..Have a Baby with Youself cuz i Said Fuck You..
````nice simily, i get it how he was talkin before u spit, so decent punch. and alright word play wit the fuck u have a baby part
Your verse makes Me Honeslty Laugh On..your whole Concepts Rap Wrong
Your justa whore for R.b to Gain Wins like a Bitch that Players Pass On..
```good punch decent finisher
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Anit this some shit how this rookie gon go up against a vet//
hold on ...... i tell yo lines wack azz fuck an i anit even seen them yet//
````good word play and multi, nice punch, but u a newb so obvious untrue
im tha type of pimp that ah just walk pass ya chick and make her blush//
then five mins later im like jay-z all up in that funk that sweet that nasty that gushy stuff//( THINK ABOUT IT)
`````good self exalt, smooth, no multi, but good
me and my niggaz own tha street so we stay committed//
wit glock tha will pop off like small bras on some big tities// (OH NO)
````nice original simily, funny, could rhyme good if said correctly so i'll give it ta ya
and tha hoes u roll wit they anit my type//
i only use them chick azz taste tester for my pipe// (DAMN)
````weak, didnt like this punch, and controdicted earlier punch
I got somethin on my waist and i call it my buscit//
quick tha ditch it//<<< when i hit u wit somethin exsplizit//

im done spittin at this bitch//
i hope yo style not ice cold, cause i spit heat that will melt it ta liquid//(itz ova)

decent finisher, good multi, work on the flow tho

vote- Lyrical, had better punches, could work on flow and muti's killa kali beat u on, but punches one this and that blush, gooshy stuff, exatlin line.

someone hit this up who can poll vote- drop a link i got chu, das how i voted on this one so hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107529
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