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Old 02-13-04, 02:52 AM   #24
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Im~flip~this~bitch~2~hell...snitches~slip~n~tell.. .watch this kid slip~N~fell..his nuts r like his dick in a bitch...its a little~stealth!/ (hahah not seen )
````decent punch gay ta repeat what u said, woulda laughed if u didnt do that
3/5 good multi
Next~2~smash...when i rip~up~Paths...Shit this kids on my dick...he's always the next~2~try~n~grab~my~ass...screaming Chugs4Life~can~i~get~an autograph!?/
```not really a punch but decent self exalt 3/5
Hell no...i speak~Out...you get beat~down aint no beef~now...shit when u go close 2 girls...thats about the only time you make people "Freak~out!"/
````funny and flowed into next puch good did just jump from topic to topic 4/5

ima~make~this~fake~bitch~coil...saran wrap his ass and leave em crammed~in~foil...stuff em back in the cabinets back with the baking~oil!/
```dumb vocab ta rhyme wit bad punch 1/5
Im~gone~wrong...insane~when~i~pop~arms...This Dudes so fucken pathetic...he wanted 2 see~his~mom~in~a~thong!/
```i get it but not too cool, didnt flow too good either cus didnt rhyme that good 2/5
I Flip~pessts~internal...dont mess~with~my~arsenal...Shit ask the docs...he's~the~one~with~the~undescended~left~test ical!/
```not a good punch didnt make sence why your arsenal had anything ta do wit his left testical, but good vocab 3/5
Finish~him...
ima~slam~this~bitch~kid...whos hype off a hand~ful~of~riddelan...shit his bad behavior has em in military~style~detention...and yet...he still couldnt get his shit 2 stand~at~attention!/ (not even homos he goes for get his shit HARD) hahah
```what, thats a bad punch, riddelan is to calm hyper kids down, but good wordplay, bad punches if it was funnier u could get away wit makin fun of someon cus their hyper but that wasn't funny 3/5

19/35
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kayohh

Like his leprechaun, his rap lacks height, I mean, we both reppin the orange white, n green,
But he must not be full irish, cuz I'm the only one with fight, I've seen,
```decent opener decent muti 4/5
Its silent but you'll be lovin this beat, as I put my fork into position to eat,
You shoulda known motha fucka, ur gunna get burnt when fuckin with heat;
````played rhymes and concept, coulda gone more origianl wit that beginin silent beat thing 2/5
I aint liking mortal laws, so I be writing with the gods,
Youre jus resiting what you saw, cuz ur biting more than Jaws;
````weak personal exalt, but original, decent meta 4/5
Your verse wasn't nuthin great, I'll post for ya somethin ta hate,
For fuckin sakes, I'll have you wining like you be crushin grapes;
```good multi's,but need cooler vocab, original wining grap line, 4/5
Every rhyme I resite's witty, my raps are all holy like Fifty, ( think )
The punch from my lines, is leavin both of your eyes puffy, like diddy;
```i thought, hah, decent lines but didnt flow too good, 3/5
I'm still dominatin and he book spittin, I mean his shit look written,
Every line I spit is like a worm when I'm fishin, I jus hook it in;
```havin your line look writen is a good thing and that was a gay meta, 2/5
And it sticks in so you should disperse son, before this verse is done,
You should do like Mase did, and go get yo church on;
```good simily but bad vocab wit the rhymes 3/5
You wanna run now? Aight, fag go, theres no where you can hide from the big K-O,
I'm everywhere you run, everywhere ya go, got all the blocks locked down like lego!
```good flow and tryin ta put energy into it, decent finisher 4/5

26/ 40

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vote-kayohh
chugs u had some gay topics das what killed u but good muti's easy ta read wit those ~ but i still ddint like them. other guy kayohh had better topics wit relatin ta fidy diddy and mase, jus cooler

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