Ok...

187
Let Me Start Off By Saying That Was Terrible...
Quit While Your Behind...
The Drumline Is Too Soft...The Bass Thing Providing What You Would Call A "Melody" Is A Pain To My Ears...It Just Sucks...
And Those Strings Sound Like A Slow Child Had A Fiasco With The Violin...

Coming For Ya
A Little Better Than 187...
Once Again Your Drumline Is Very Soft...The Bass Is Aight...
The Melody Would Be Good Once And A While, But It Just Gets Boring And Repetitive...

You Need Some Help...