--[Flow]---
Your flow was brutally ferocious..not what i was expected, you had mad rhymes and mad internals...the structure to it was outragous, ever bar was exactly the same length was made it just flow of the tip of my tounge...wow.

--[Vocab]--
Vocab another thing that really stood out for me, it was full of comlexity and depth, ever line had a meaning and it was portrayed to fit into the story well, your didn't under or overuse your vocab, think that it was the right length and wasn't just throwing in to make up the bar size:
"A charismatic Chaldean holds the line by himself,
Men siphon off courage like leeches with health,"

--[Concept]--
What really struck me here was the blatent imagry...defeiently not what i was expecting, you had every minute detail craved into this piece, you amde me want to read on and on and helped me to sympathise with the dead and almost be in direct contact with the two armies...
some dope bars:
"Then a trumpet blasts and ruptures the solitude,
Distant drums, shouts and marching all intrude,"

Javelins arc overhead and strike dashing warriors,
Death visits the field and waits in soldier’s foyers,

Husbands, sons and fathers are such no longer,
A fox’s body lies shattered in his barrow yonder,
Birds are returning but these are a different sort,
They feast on flesh and scream aloud the report,

--[Overall]--
One of the best pieces i've seen on Open mic, it had all the characteristic of a legend...flow,brutal imagry,vocab....4.7/5...hit me up if you wanna collab sometime dawg, cos that shit was hott.