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Old 02-13-04, 07:00 AM   #11
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
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Damn yo i dont know what to say it was aight........
heres some advise dont make it so confusing,
try to put urself in another persons shoes and read it,
and try to use londer sentences add some words on, for example when you said
"Im distant with this shit" you could have said "im distant DEATH RIPPIN with dis shit"
and when you said "Hit and run on a slut" you could have said "I BUST A NUT LIKE A hit and run on a slut"
so just try to add more words onto the sentences then you will have it on lock!

aight if you could hit me back honestly at "To whome it may concern"
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