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Old 02-13-04, 12:07 PM   #8
M&rk
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nuer- your rhymes were streched, and didn't have any real punches in there besides that your never on top thing, but that wasn't really much of a punch.

dirty- yours flowed better cus it wasn't streched and i could notice the multi's u put in.
good vocab besides rhymin wit "cane" one of those times, das never cool. punches hit better cus u actually had some.

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