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Word why are u here? when you belong in a promdress?
Far from skill....Your getting beat by Killaconcepz/1
^weak punch and an Ok personal
Call a Pharmasist...You gon need summin to numb your face...
This kid's like his structure, He just takes up space!/2
^aight this is an ok simile punch.....
Chalk line traced...your best play is to plead insanity...
It's clear ta see, Keep Goin...
An you gon' be endangered like them Manatee's/3
^creative but came off kind of stupid......
your 0-2 for a reason,WordPlay? You don't carry your name
It's easy to see thru...The fact your whiter than Hanes/4
^aight nice punch .....racist but nice.......
Think it's cus disqualified? then keep quoting them lie's..
I'll sit an watch....as your Loss column multiplies/5
_^ok good closer good verse lots of personals .......not bad overall...._________________
my name jumped the VS. stampeded em weak and verbless/
leavin' ya chained and burnin'...beggin' for gauze and surgeons/
^ok this is a good opener....nice multis good wordplay/ punch
oakley fucked up and battled someone better than/
half of this site, on one account, after my rhymes melted them/
^kinda lost your flow on this one......not a good bar....
after I retort, you'll require life support, you best aquire rhyme resource/
reply, and end up with shades, turned blades, with me applyin' force/
^good multis, good wordplay....you got potential harness your skills more though...
you can peep the morgue...after I leap the board/
retreat...before you recieve the beating you've been askin' for/
^ok this is fine you already used leap though.........
preda-tor, oh muther fuck a metphor, you couldn't turn a vote/
with a propellar, and a crooked new york senator/
^hehe nice ending i like it...good shit...nice opener and closer....overall ok verse
This was a good battle Oakley came more consitent with personals which hit hard at times and wordplay banged out the multis with creative punches....I personally think that personal hit harder than multi punches and that Oakley just barely takes this one good effort by both MC's peace.
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