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Old 02-13-04, 12:13 PM   #2
B.I.Detained
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wow..Ya updated me w/ small parts before it was finished
but the finished article was one of the most heart felt
pieces I've read here. Your detail N thougfht into the
mothers state of mind was amazing! you really delved into
her mind. & like i said i knew summit bad was gonna happen
b/coz both parents love conflicted for their child they were
taught a harsh lesson. To actually put the child first
& not themselves. This was Lump in the throat material
and ya deserve good apraisels for this.
I'd like to see stories of a broken pen become a series
of well thought out pieces. Mad props on this
& keep spittin Ill drops..pz
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