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Old 02-13-04, 12:17 PM   #8
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This battle was pretty good i thought a lot better then what i could pull off ..
but anyways..

Mentill.. you had a good concrete verse with hard consistant punches more personal which made it witty..your opener i thought was dope...same as your closer...and a nice middlevery well done...

Fue...i thought you could of done a lot better i'm not saying you fed but you had the same type of closer which made this turn out weak...but you had some good punches just not as witty could'a maybe been worded differently..but still a good verse

Return the faver...hit up the battle in my sig...peace