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Old 02-13-04, 12:28 PM   #9
Daffer22
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Pictureperfect had a betta flow cuz he had sum nice rhymes in there with a gud wordplay, his punches came thru hard and his personals absolutely killed spitta, his structure could be betta tho, you also had sum nice multis in your verse, you probably can work a bit on your openings

Wigga Spiita your flow was weak I din'tsaw any gud rhymes in there, it had no variation, no gud wordplay, elevate man, your punches came thru weak and you barely had personals, you have to have perzsonals, your structure was aight i suppose, you need to work on punches personals multis......everything

Vote picture, return the favor man
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596
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