IP:
i have to say
i was a bit dissapointed with this
i'll compare it to a blockbuster..you go and see full of expectation
and yes it was good..but not fulfilling
mavens was the one which caught my imagination the most for sure.
really good imagery and word usage
koalatee and loki...expected a bit better to be honest
just didnt really capture me with your pieces
appreciate the vocabulary used but it seemed to detract in a way..
still better than average
it seemed you exchanged some heart and emotion and imagery for intelligent writing
pax
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