| 
	
		
		 IP: 
 
  		
		
		i have to say 
i was a bit dissapointed with this 
i'll compare it to a blockbuster..you go and see full of expectation 
and yes it was good..but not fulfilling 
 
mavens was the one which caught my imagination the most for sure. 
really good imagery and word usage 
koalatee and loki...expected a bit better to be honest 
just didnt really capture me with your pieces 
appreciate the vocabulary used but it seemed to detract in a way.. 
still better than average 
it seemed you exchanged some heart and emotion and imagery for intelligent writing 
 
pax 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
	 |