Damn Eddy .. this piece was deep and real as shit man .. Such a touching story .. Imagery in this piece was beautiful man .. And the writing of it seemed well planned out and ended up highly dope .. Was a fucced up and crazy story .. But really believable in the same way .. Mad props on this .. One part of this really drew me in man .. Let alone .. The very first line about the pen drew me in .. But this part here ..


Cause the phone went and she didnt know what to do
her mind filled up w/ decisions 'phone can wait, if its important it rings again in a few'
But what if its not?
maybe its a crucial call..& needs answered right away
i need to answer now! the way i live i cant suffer from any kind of delay
So she putted a towl into the tub, hoping the baby wont slip..
ran to the phone picked it up, but unfortuantly the baby did!..


That part set up your endin' so dopely man .. This piece really hit home deeply man .. A dope story .. Very sick piece all around .. Keep writin' man .. One