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Old 02-13-04, 12:59 PM   #5
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Oakley Break down

Sending subliminal messages like under's fronting a cult...
Avatar backward's stating to "IM" him in "Bulc"!/1
Creative but not hard hittning

Your lucky your even here, monitors preventing my reach
If wakness was censored'your whole verse would be bleeps!/2
^ok for a filler

This kid's ancient, Key'in up and dealin wit splinters..(wooden keyboard)
Droppin played punches more than a Kinko's printer!/3
OK pretty good

Sayin you don't wanna get rusty and u too busy wit school..
And know your more topical? How? ur gettin 4-0'd by Rule!/4
Tight

I dont even have to say shit, your own crew laughed at your pic
Half bitch, only reason your mother kept u was to get circus rich
Tight
8/10

Underated Breakdown

Beaten still with absence of both Bio information and avatars.....
cuz your a herb ...look at the evidence you still number your bars....
Tight

Kid wants to get a name for himself get known.... he's just thirsty to rhyme...
but like fools getin played at prom........your just left in the punch line...
no great but ok

Check it i know why you named yourself after a pair of glasses...
cause the shades hide the black eyes i give to you in Masses...
good filler

3-0 nice start why step to me and stunt your growth...?...
up against the ropes in a choke....lemme help ya get the beef out ya throat..
tight

prolly came really personal on me.......... cause i got plenty shit to play with.....
your like the last three letters of your name plus the first....you scared little bitch(yelo) Tight as closer
9/10

Tight battle you both are good some shit that i didnt like was the underrated stucture but liked his punches. Oakley had some creative shit but fillers wernt very good so I am gonna have to give this to under