Kid you got 3 battles checked into now so your wins brittle
Shouldn'a made you game should'a chocked on the whistle
^hmm alright this isn't a bad opener....personal Ok
Indeed your twisted big birds going out of business quick
He went down with ya battle ship like ya head to a dick
^meh this is a sex line try to stay away from those...
Don't jump to conclusions about links in my sig light weight
There to prove i'd beat you topically as well for fuck sakes
^good line......good bar nice nice
Michigan huh? your across the border far from rules zone
Resembles ya talent level princess down away from my throne
^hmm alright this is an OK personal not stingin like it should though
I could'a slaughtered you with punches from the eye of death
See the casket open with a mirror now tell me has the L Left?
^ok this is a gpod personal Punch and you threw in some wordplay nice...


This your first real battle Rule?! I can tell, just stick to topicals,
Before I put a 6 pack right into your face, like thick abdominals,
^ok good meta4 nice personal good opener
Ruler?! Hold on buddy, lemme measure the guillotine,
Before we see your spleen end up all in people's drinks, like Creatine,
^ok this is another Ok meta4...bad play off the name in my opinion
Rule a virgin, I'm 'full o queens' the way my cards all royal,
Punch you in the face 21 times, make ya eye 'Black Jack', like gargoyles,
^hmm alright i didn't like this bar either kind of filler in the first
Charbroil you, Rule couldn't 'rip the net' if he was a 'Big Fish',
Rule prays for votes, 5 for me, and he's already on his 'sixth wish',
^good wordplay i like it punch came a little weak but nice overall
Meantion me openly 3 times, I'll appear, Death's what you hopin',
Rule has septicly-spoken, Never Heard??? Rules are meant to be broken.
^hehe nice good ending good opener and ending....

I think brethen came nice good opener and ending but his middle fell off so just figure out how to fill out your verse a little more brethren and you'll get it......Rule nice consistency with a few creative lines...work on your punches and get rid of some of your sensless profanity....both y'all hit this up plz thanx...

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