.:k:.
Ok 1 line in and already im wondering..why the fuck i battled this herb,
cause to be honest these lines aint going against sumone.
............................ they deserve............,
punch,metiphore = 6
little hoe....im just fallen around i cant take this serious,
cause to be honest ive seen a better flow..comeing from a period,
punch,wordplay = 7
you aint got skill kid don't say you have..your demented,
umm ill giv this to you with some maths...t
.......................he poll for K 100 as a percentage,........
punch,-flo = 4
fuck 10 lines merk him with 8...like a building site im going to dissmantle,
"you don't think hes wak?"...well to comfirm it ill leave this,
....................with an example.................
punch,personal = 7
This was OK. I liked it personally. It was nice how you for the most time had nice flo and it was nice and short. That one line I didn't like. To be honest it kinda confused me. Maybe you can explain it.
Overall = 24
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Magic MK
OK it's like this in my battle with K,
he underestimated me and he is going to pay,
-filler = 1
you might say something lame like i'm gay
but in reality you have nothing to display,
-repeated ryhme scheme,punch = 2
your punchez just don't cut it in this place
so go out and live with your disgrace
punch = 1
please don't take this the wrong way
because the game that i play flows like a freeway
metiphore,-self hype = 0
he deosn't know that he is fuckin with a real MC
And he knows that he's the one with the HIV.
-played,punch = 1
Way to basic in my eyes. The structure was nice and short, but so was your vocab,punches,and metiphores. You had no wordplay. Like TheUnderRated said, visit WEC.
Overall = 5
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Vote = .:k:.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114031