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Old 02-13-04, 02:23 PM   #9
rule
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This was a pretty good battle...

Oakley...you had some strong points to your verse but could have re-worded some things to make them better or more unique good verse though just nt very consistant

Under...good verse a little more consistant with hard punches structure from both was same

Over all Under took this with more creativity and wittiness