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..Soft Focus..
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IP:
This kid's a moron, and I'm being modest...
His avi's his idea of portraying an artist/1
Good opener....6/10
seriously, he sit's an votes like he's hardcore..
but goes to the WEC for punches n metiphores?../2
LOL...good shit...6.5
Why not elevated? Oh wait, that's right you'd get beat..
You aint got enuff Arson'ill to be say your Elite/3(sig)
Good personal 5/10
Even Hottie said it, IJL? ya'll aren't respected...
Don't you understand, your prone to clownish efforts/4
Should'a been worded differently...3/10
An what's up wit your title sayin "don't fuck with me"?
Please...
Your only talents hiding underrated's anal beads/5
Started off good but lost it...3/10
overall:23.5/50
Oak spoke too soon,Now he's in Doub jeopardy and screwed
Q: This is a herbbish move...
...A: What is Oakley callin out the IJL crew
^^Good line..I think the answer should of been worded different....7/10
You said you'd 5-0 both me and UnderRated...bitch
Now this kats got ya tongue...
...Cause vets conclude...your drop aint shit
Okie..i think 5-0 should'a maybe said merked or something...5/10
You come with weak punches played rhymes, you at ya peak
And do all of RB a favor...
...Please don't look before you leap
Okie line:5/10
You aint got nothin ta back ya shit up, jus anutha newb who acts hard
Jus a wannabe MC from Maryland got as much respect as ya avatar (none)
Stated off okie but ended shitty 2/10
PMin me like mad ... sayin I'm no vet and you'll KO me dude
Not even the Oaks in ya sig will protect from my 'sonning' you
Good closer I liked the name play...6/10
Over all:25/50
Over all Lyric came harder more consistant...close though....oakley i thought you had this but that was before I read lyrics verse...i see your elavating every drop though...keep it up
Can you both hit up the battle in my sig honestly please thanks
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