yea here ya go i'll break it down....as far as wittiness is concerned syck came better alot of good met4's and wordplay throughout his verse.....alot to work on still though syck your punches didn't hit as hard as you would like them to......the best ones you had were....the bruise faded line and the death in the family line......make your punches short and sweet and that will help them be more affective also make sure you look at what your saying in your punch.....like i leave this kid stuck in the face ...cause he's a disgrace....all you really did was call him a disgrace.....thats not so hardcore despite the line b4 it....

Bruise you have the right idea just need to work on sculpting your style a bit...you said it yourself that you came a little weak which is good so that means you know what weak is....I recommend walkin around in your day to day life and thinking in metaphors and punches it really helps ...overall good battle ..vote syck pz.