Alright i think daffer killed the comp here...just overall better flow better style and structure...just overall seemed like you understand how to write more.young i didnt feel your style to much but it wasnt horrible your on the right track...some eghhh alright disses nice work...

please return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113957

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