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Old 02-13-04, 04:26 PM   #28
M&rk
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yo daffer u came real weak in this battle, bad vocab, and no wordplay, u cant jus win a battle cus u goin agianst a newbie, elevate and maybe bring sumin to the table instead of jus gettin served

young 5 mic, good word play, even tho it was pretty gay wit the leadin back to mcdonalds but that was good wordplay anyway. u really need ta work on your structure and topics but your punches and multi's and wordply win this.

vote-young 5 mic
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