u lie...

i doubt tihs was really on ur mind....
the beginning seemed like u were trying to hard
to use metas and vocab and shit...it seemed like
a bunch of nonsense to me...i dont really like reading
that type of shit....but...u mellowed out after that....
got a bit more realistic though not that much...
i didnt like the end however..the keying up shit...nah..
sorry butthats my opinion...reading crazy synogogical nonsense
bugs me...peace

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