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Old 02-13-04, 05:19 PM   #18
.Iknoevel.
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Oak

This kid's a moron, and I'm being modest...
His avi's his idea of portraying an artist/1
nice opening.. the personal was good... 7/10
seriously, he sit's an votes like he's hardcore..
but goes to the WEC for punches n metiphores?../2
lmao.. true shit, alot people act tough when they vote but then ask for all this help on wack shit... 8.5/10
Why not elevated? Oh wait, that's right you'd get beat..
You aint got enuff Arson'ill to be say your Elite/3(sig)
wordplay was good.. i like it.. 6/10
Even Hottie said it, IJL? ya'll aren't respected...
Don't you understand, your prone to clownish efforts/4
not really feelin the rhyme... but it was a good punch .. 5/10
An what's up wit your title sayin "don't fuck with me"?
Please...
Your only talents hiding underrated's anal beads/5
lol.. nice closing.. 8.5/10

Overall - 35/50


Lyric

Oak spoke too soon,Now he's in Doub jeopardy and screwed
Q: This is a herbbish move...
...A: What is Oakley callin out the IJL crew
lol.. u just called ya crew herbs basically...wack opening.. 0/10
You said you'd 5-0 both me and UnderRated...bitch
Now this kats got ya tongue...
...Cause vets conclude...your drop aint shit
worded horribly, rhyme was plain wit bitch and shit..not feelin it.. 2/10
You come with weak punches played rhymes, you at ya peak
And do all of RB a favor...
...Please don't look before you leap
little bit played... but decent... 5/10
You aint got nothin ta back ya shit up, jus anutha newb who acts hard
Jus a wannabe MC from Maryland got as much respect as ya avatar (none)
nice punch.. good personal... but ya coulda made it better by ya wording, but 8/10
PMin me like mad ... sayin I'm no vet and you'll KO me dude
Not even the Oaks in ya sig will protect from my 'sonning' you
decent closer.. 5/10

overall - 20/50


my vote - Oak..he came harder wit his punches and had more wordplay
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