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Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….

first line is pretty good.......wasnt feelin the punch in the second line.....

merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......

ok frist line.......wasn't feelin the punch in the second line..........coulda been worded better also......

I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,

pretty tight wordplay in the second line..........pretty good punch......first line was aight........

K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,

first line is played..........as well as the second line.........

Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,

i liked the first line.........second line was an ok closer.........coulda been worded better also.......

CONCLUSION - structure was ok........didnt like the whole line wit periods, then the rest of the text.......flow was a lil hard to catch on to........vocab was pretty good.........multis were good........some of the wordplay was tight........ok punches..........didnt see any good personals......

OVERALL - 6.5/10

ILL TESTAMENT

I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..

pretty good opener.......first line was nice.......second line was a lil played but still pretty good.....

Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..

tight first line......feelin this personal..........second line was pretty good......

Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..

good wordplay and punch on the first line...........ok wordplay on the second.....

Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..

ok first line.....wasnt feelin the second line.......

He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"

tight ass closer.........nice punch........ill personal..........good wordplay......shit was fire..........

CONCLUSION - ill had good structure........flow was on target.........vocab was good.......the multis were ok........wordplay was tight.........punches hit hard.........ill personals.....

OVERALL - 8/10

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