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i aint gon go easy on u cause u from phoenix
ill bring my best shit to the table i mean it
whack...simplistic
my lyrics hot enough to heat u up in the summer
over 200 degrees while yours are 20 under
nothing here
an illegal alien, like ur entire city
ur lyrics suck, so just retire quickly
weak
goin around town like yo what up
no one want to hear ur verse, so shut up
blah
go back and read my verse again, dont miss a thing
no you know how i beat, werent u listening
no punches in your entire verse

this bitch thinks he's "sweet" but never "made-love", and how does he think hes comin wit hard "punches" when hes "afraid-to-shove"/
ur weak, wack punches played-above lies about bein in love, and how the fuck am i supposed to lose to guy whos askin to be "made-fun-of"/
stretched man...not bad
your wack, u got weak punches that have yet-to-connect, just be takin this battle and comin that wack, ur rap career is set-to-wreck/
u bet-im-correct, im never wrong and at 1-7 everyone knows ur horrible, I spit lyrical "cancer" and im always a "threat-to-infect"/
decent
ur punches r like slime-but-dry, there gross, nasty and bullshit, im killin u, but no one gives a shit, its just a crime-to-a-guy/
dawg ur rhymes-r-lies, im sick of hearin ur bullshit so ima pop u wit my lyrical nine cause honestly bitch, its ur time-to-die/
ok
u rap like ur quite-high, cause u make no sense, and no one can be that wack, and that’s said as fuck u think it’s a tight-buy/
ur outta luck cause dawg, ya writes-dry, u suck, but how the fuck am I supposed to be "straight" wit a dude who "likes-guys"/
ok...kinda played
uve already blown-fame, ur punches r round, and they never "move" anybody, so thats y cats say u bringin a "stone-game"/
ur shit is known-as-lame, and this fag thinks hes comin into this battle "original" but cant even think of his "own-name"/
ehh ok

~Yo What Up~ took this...kinda one sided....Proof jus didn't come with any punches...~Yo~ had some nice ones...lines a bit stretched...but good punches none-the-less.

CUDNT AGREE MORE......PROOF YOUR WHOLE VERSE WAS POOR AND IT WAS PLAYED UR SHIT WAS REALLY NEWB ISH AND U NEED SERIOUS ELEVATION NOW 2 WHAT UP.......UR SHIT WAS KINDA STRETCHED BADLY IN PLACES.....UR PUNCHES WERE IGHT ASND WERE ALOT BETTER THAN PROOF U STILL NEED ELEVATION BUT NICE DROP AS IT WAS WAY BETTER THAN PROOF.......

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