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Nice drop good flow and very nice vocab and i know you prolly seen this b4 but you need more imagery if give more details in stories it makes'em stand out and takin to the place or thing you talkin bout nice drop anyway tho
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I smiled at the devil  as his sweat pounded the ground and left burnt black marks on the path as he walked towards me with crimson-like skin and universal black horns and as he reached for my lifeless corpse a black-robed figure that was hard to discern whispered to me "Your days are numbered".
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