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Old 02-13-04, 08:18 PM   #21
Brethren
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Punches: Lethal, much better punches, Proof's just seemed to drag off into endless babble
Wordplay: Lethal, had the combust line, even though it was a weak wordplay, it's wordplay
Multis: Lethal, had a set 3 syllables every rhyme, good structure
Personals: Proof, Proof attempted, though they were whack, still personals
Opener: Lethal, decent punch opener
Closer: Lethal, kinda weak, but still a lot better

Vote - Lethal N Jectionz

...Washed Up N Far-From-Dope, This Faggots Droppin Bars-Of-Soap!..Keep Wishin Youll Eat An Emcee And Most Definitly Starve-From-Hope...
Dope bar (I thought)

if u came to denver, ud get capped down
Ultra weak line, where does this go??? Find new stuff to rap about.

Return the favor in my battle with Rule
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