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Old 02-13-04, 08:27 PM   #19
Brethren
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Punches: Yo, some dope punches, Proof just rambled on about something, i don't remember.
Wordplay: Yo, he had the afraid to shove line, I considered that wordplay
Multis: Yo, had 4 multis about every line, 3-5 syllables each.
Personals: Yo, had the Proof/D12 line, and the made fun of line.
Opener: Yo, opened with a nice personal
Closer: Yo, closed with another decent personal

Vote - Yo What Up

No chance for Proof, one-sided as fuck. Proof, think of a comparison between 2 things to make a punch, think of words inside words for wordplay, just do something besides talking. Wackness Center quickly.

this bitch thinks he's "sweet" but never "made-love", and how does he think hes comin wit hard "punches" when hes "afraid-to-shove"/
ur weak, wack punches played-above lies about bein in love, and how the fuck am i supposed to lose to guy whos askin to be "made-fun-of"/
Best bar from Yo What Up

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