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RULE

Kid you got 3 battles checked into now so your wins brittle
Shouldn'a made you game should'a chocked on the whistle
ok opener..........wasnt really feelin the second line..
Indeed your twisted big birds going out of business quick
He went down with ya battle ship like ya head to a dick
pretty tight.......feelin the second line......good wordplay.......
Don't jump to conclusions about links in my sig light weight
There to prove i'd beat you topically as well for fuck sakes
decent.......wasnt really a punch........its aight........
Michigan huh? your across the border far from rules zone
Resembles ya talent level princess down away from my throne
ok first line......second line is pretty good.......ok punch.......
I could'a slaughtered you with punches from the eye of death
See the casket open with a mirror now tell me has the L Left?
i liked this closer.........second line is tight.........good punch.......

Conclusion - structure was good.......flow was on target..........vocab was pretty good........multis were ok.......some of the wordplay was tight........some of the punches connected..........ok personal

OVERALL - 6.5/10

BRETHEN

This your first real battle Rule?! I can tell, just stick to topicals,
Before I put a 6 pack right into your face, like thick abdominals,
nice opener........good punch........nice wordplay......good way to start the battle......
Ruler?! Hold on buddy, lemme measure the guillotine,
Before we see your spleen end up all in people's drinks, like Creatine,
no punch.......wordplay and multis are tight........
Rule a virgin, I'm 'full o queens' the way my cards all royal,
Punch you in the face 21 times, make ya eye 'Black Jack', like gargoyles,
good punch.......nice wordplay.........
Charbroil you, Rule couldn't 'rip the net' if he was a 'Big Fish',
Rule prays for votes, 5 for me, and he's already on his 'sixth wish',
once again, good punch........tight wordplay.......
Meantion me openly 3 times, I'll appear, Death's what you hopin',
Rule has septicly-spoken, Never Heard??? Rules are meant to be broken.
pretty ill closer.........while the second line is kinda played its still good.........nice personal.........

CONCLUSION - good structure........flow was on target........vocab was good........multis were pretty good.........nice wordplay........the punches that were there connected well.........tight personals......

OVERALL - 7.5/10

VOTE - BRETHEN