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Flyweight
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IP:
Interesting. Thought you did better on the positive side. Your negative verse seemed more neutral than negative. Good vocab' - liked the way you constructed some of your rhymes to have three words match with one, etc. like:
throw at me,
poetry,
owing me
Saw a few lines where the flow seemed a little off but overall good. Hit something in my sig if you can. (Broken Metamorphosis if you haven't already preferably)
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