cruel intentions:your opener was average, the flow was sort of fucked, and you flipped his name in the most obvious way possible. your punches real played, you should try being creative, cause gun and dick punches are just amature. your structure was good, you had some lines that were short on sylables, but overall it flowed pretty well. you had no metaphors or wordplay.....your closer was ayite, I don't know about anybody else, but I've heard that kanye west punch used in so many battles lately, that whe nI read em, they have no power. you need to just keep battling, youll get better everytime..
piss on da hataz: your opener was pretty good, I don't know whether you noticed or not, but your opener is also a norman bates metaphor, you know from the movie psycho...anyways your punches were played but they a little more thought out and they hit little harder than your opponents...you had no multiples, or wordplay..you had an accidental metaphor.......your closer hit so soft, even the flow was nice, you had no power.....keep it up..you got potential...
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