ha..you were on some necro type shit here....the laughing although a little annoying accually helped with what you were about to spit, so it worked in my opinion, you spit some crazy lines in there you sick fuck..lol...the hook could use a little work...the delivery was real original..don't listen to anybody, keep it how you like it...and keep recording'......
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you probably don't care about text, but I need some votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114089
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112366
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113218
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heres one quick audio I freestyled for a battle a while back..you can peep and give me feedback if you want ev..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/s...groundmusic.htm