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Old 02-14-04, 10:53 AM   #10
Brethren
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Punches: Que, some nice ones from both, Que had a few more
Wordplay: Oakley, the broke line, I wouldn't've gotten that if you didn't explain it, too confusing. I didn't know Token is slang for money.
Multis: Que, every now and then had 3-4 syllables, Oakley had around 2 every time
Personals: Que, had the sig glowing line, and the ray-mans line. Oakley, the instant replay joke must've been used a million times.
Opener: Tie, both were pretty nice, Oakley's flow in on point, both opened pretty nice.
Closer: Oak, que's finish was pretty weak, good use of multis, but nothing besides that. Oak finished with a wordplay.

Vote - Quelude

Decent battle, Oakley you got the idea. You are better than a lot of these whack rappers in the front lines, so you'll step up to elevated lines real quickly. Throw in a few more punches, you got a relly good flow, so keep that. Quelude, your flow was a little off, but good punches and personals. Both of you keep it up.

Where's ya crew?..ain't got one?...who wanna squad with a bitch?
What's your roster?..your name repeats like a comp with a glitch
Best bar from Que, dope multi with it

sellin "the good shit?" I'd rather buy used condoms off Ebay
Nice personal, funny

Return the favor in my battle with Rule
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