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Old 02-14-04, 11:02 AM   #7
Tactixx
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Turning your verse impressive, is like turning shut eye to blinks...
With a name that confusing, your avy has needed to think^^
^......that line is pretty confusing but ok..........^
Are you looking for the truth? Well its playing hide and seek...
because it would say...
Your wackness is the size of Mountains if you took time to take a Peak...
......pretty weak punch, decent..... wordplay^
Multiple personalities, so you switch from good to evil...
In fact..
You abreviated your own name just to hide Your Ten Egoes..
^.....kinda weak.....^
They say where you come from is how your going end...
Take a look at WA...
...You come from a place named after the dead
^.....ok, good that you knew that i guess.....^^^
It must be hard being you, with no talent, battling risks...
Giving you suicidal thoughts...
...Your skills are almost as dead-cut as your wrists...
^...nice closer....^


wow man im suprised ur punches hit really hard
then again im usually batteling ppl like hot barz
......^why would u tell him his punches hit hard?...^
how'd u know my state's named after a dead president
see the psyche ward really does help there residents
^......decent punch, saved by the second line.....^
damn im dissapointed in my self y did i agree 2 battle u
mom said dont make fun of tards i told her i was through
^.....not ver creative....^
oh no dude ur thinkin 2 hard please stop the frustration
dont talk about slittin wrists u might give n 2 temptation
^......nice.....^
i wouldnt be suprised if the kid died of an anurism
if he tells u that hes beatin me its purely fiction
^....not a very good closer.....^

well, not the best verses i've read, i know ive read better from you ytegrl...
Junio i thought won this just just for the mere fact that his vocab was better, he had a couple of good punches, his closer for one was nice, he had some more personals
Vote-Junio