some tactixx u should use is a fucking dictionary
take my advice seek some lyrical rehab
cuz ur lines r whack and have no vocab
Uh…what? You must be talking about yourself here.
u picked the wrong nigga to fuck with, you dont wanna test this
let me guess wat ur verse is gunna be filled with ,
some gangster lines, then some prewrites, and a whole lotta bullshit
I think this is one bar? Weak… bitch u cant handle Lust, my lines will hit harder then any lines u spit
u dont deserve to battle me , u should quit
No
ill give u a tast of mah rhymes make u delerious n shyt
it will seem like u on shrooms n got a crazzi trip
No no no
stepin to me is like jackin off to a grim reaper poster ill beat u to death
Huh? And no.




I think it's safe to trust, when i say i'm quick to bust,
I must be...... this MC quick to let his skills rust,
Ehh weak
ashes to ashes dust to dust,
my punches hit you so hard tectonic plates thrust,
Ok…kinda weak
my rhymes come in surplus, i got more in store,
assume the position, get down on all fours,
Ok…cause this whore gettin fucked, and im ready for war,
poor lust, looks like you're in a bad position,
another victim... my rhymes shine and glisten,
No …listen, your weak new york style just aint hittin,
kid's soft as a kitten, i leave lacerations everytime im rippin,
naa…I'm not sorry for lyrically strippin your reputation,
I went easy on you kid your rhymes need elevation....
Best line…still needs some wit for it to be good

You two kids concentrate too much on the rhyme. Also, avoid writing three lines in a row that rhymed, and the next line started a new bar. Try to have even bars, without it you look gay and it throws off the whole thing into what? When your expecting another line in that bar. Overall Tactixx had a much better verse...

Vote- Tactixx

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