ite i aint gonna break this down na...cause ive read both and its clear,
yte girl you had no punches attall you used played shit,
your flow was ite but that was just because you used lil,
words wich are wak 2 b honest ma..........your structure was ok,
but no real punches,,...junio not bad man,
you actually had punches that stood out in here,
and hit on personals also manl.............structure came a lil,
streched in places but not bad man nice.....v-j

drop a vote on this plz...............thx...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113660 ........pz