View Single Post
Old 02-14-04, 01:24 PM   #6
:)
smiley on ya mothers
 
:)'s Avatar
 
Posts: 1,260
From: columbus, ohio
IP:

hey i wasnt really impressed with both verses.. i didnt really see those many punchlines or good personals in here

but this is how i see it

overall view of battle- freeman.. your verse didnt really have those many punchlines and your wordplay was so so .. however you had disses in your verse that outedged straight aces verse.. i felt like these disses of yours were better than anything that straight ace "You can beat newbs but...
... When it comes to me you cant hack it"

also this line was ok ---------> "Making your avy a portrait of you.. Leaving you mentally broken
My advice to you...
... Is go on get help from Token"

now straight ace i didnt really like your verse.. i felt like alot of your personals didnt hit hard lines like this were weak to me --------------> "May think u'd win..but despite of the season, I'll make u Fall..
& the win always comes Mi-Wee..
.......Just like the writings.......on his wall..."

your personals lacked any intesity and i didnt realyl see any punchlines at all in your verse.. shit was kind of weak to me

VOTE: freeman.. i vote for freeman on this basically because he had the better disses and wordplay in this battle
__________________
single file, single files hoes come on in