dude, this was so half assed, don't even bother posting them if you're not gonna work on them.
First of all, write about something you care about....something that means something to you. Secondly, try to have a fairly constant rhyme scheme, at least at first, so it's easier for the reader to find the flow. Thirdly, try to describe things...use vocabulary and similes and metaphors and it will greatly improve your content.
A way to improve your flow is to try to have the same number of syllables in every line.
Try harder next time.

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