freeman
This bitch is distorted.. You can tell you dont have a good poker face
Here your out of place...
... Rejected from the deck cuz ur the 5th ace
could of been worded better, pretty good, 7/10

Just quit already.. Your verse should be burnt.. You should pack it
You can beat newbs but...
... When it comes to me you cant hack it
second line was nice first, not to good, 6/10

Sending you packing.. Off to the woods with you.. Ace the little camper
You got 13 wins cuz your from edit so all you...
... Do to your verse is tamper
too many card jokes, not a very good punch n e way, 5/10

Making your avy a portrait of you.. Leaving you mentally broken
My advice to you...
... Is go on get help from Token
i didnt like the set up, but second line was nice, 6/10

Its nice to see you admit.. Im happy that finally you followed suit
Im the one who made your eyes roll...
... By making my writing minute
u using both, cards in ur verse an his avy, 5/10


you verse seemed to be basing your punches on two points, cads an his avy, o it was like you was repeating yourslef, but flipping, your punches, which took away the origionality towards the end!!


overall 29/50



straight ace
May think u'd win..but despite of the season, I'll make u Fall..
& the win always comes Mi-Wee..
.......Just like the writings.......on his wall...
nice wordplay, ot very direct, 6/10

It occured to me, how ur open mic style..looks 'lot like mine..
...startin with dots & writin in italic..
...& Free tried to cross it...but kept under lined..
nice personal, 7/10

Seeds of doubt.. & Free knows in Fl he's the best..
I'm the gardener...
......Of ur field of dreams & i just cut of ur root to succes..
very creative, 6/10

A cheatin' present O ever so imaginative...But yes true..
"It's nothing very different from any other normal day"
..Exactly....... that's why she's spendin' Valentine's..
.....Far away from you!
a good personal, an nice punch, 16/20


overall 35/50


the fact that freeman used the same concepts in his verse proabably lost this battle!!

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