ayo ayo its young thug comin out jus hear me tho//
most iLLest rythmin indiviual//
***wtf sounds like a dr.pepper, np punch and weal personal***
hatas out dare are watchin me there actin so damn antilitical//
yo wut up aint no one toppin me so stop actin critical//
***again wtf very weak, line***
get at you listen while i spit at you//
aint kno ghost ritin 4 me ya kno i can spit my own flow//
***an ok personal***
jus listen there aint no stoppin me no//
aint kno one close 2 me no//
***i can think of a hundred words that rhyme with "no" how come u couldn't?***
im takin ova ova this rap shit from coast to coast//
thats why i just ate you like a buttered toast//
**this is prolly ur best punch,,very sad***
you iz one wack ass M. C.//
stop actin like your tha king of this R. A. P.//
***wtf dat dont count as a rhyme****
im the iLLest im the most hot but i neva break a sweat//
so stop steppin and challangein me cuz you aint a treat//
****finally a good punch, need more of these if u wants to win***
stepping to me you just got fucked up and left 2 bleed//
so now ya heart is skippin like scratched cds//
***o k i take back wat i said dis is ur best line...***
overall: you started off weak and finally picked up towards da end, but it was a lil too late for it though....try to get harder punches and bigger vocab also work on ur structure and flow.....
4/10
^^^spoken like a true champ........LMFAO.......do u not remember when YOU called ME out for a spot in the crew.........fuckin fag.........check it out......yo, yo.....
just dont hit-submit, i knew u were a crap emcee, but even ya spits-shit/
admit-and-quit, u suck, so either quit or ill come through and slit-ya-wrist/
****good hard punch, excellent use of multis****
u pretend-to-concur, u claim u spit fire, but ur just a lone-ember/
fuck NAD, tryin to act like u in a decent crew, but u the only-member/
***o mah fuck..lol…lol.lmfao.***
i merk fast and unlock-blurs, i spit bombs, and i swear a shock-will-occur/
i knock-herbs, and when im done rippin u, ur brain will have gone yonkerz/
**ok punch not dat great*****
u just a dumb-blessin, ur best chance is to just ask me for some-lessons/
u rap shot up, so just take this blast from my lyrical smith and wesson/
**aight good line nice voab***
ur not even part-talk, ur horrible, u bein ill is about as true as a smart-jock/
ima make ur heart-stop, no one wants u here, so get ur shit and start-to-walk/
**wats up with the heart closers….imma say played***
OVERALL:good clean drop, not the best I’ve seen from you but good enough to let u stay in da crew and win dis battle in mah opinion
7/10
vote=yo wat up
hit dis one up
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