o man....nice battle....but yo what up barely takes this for hiz punches and pesonals....his structure was off...but the punches covered all that up
pretty good battle
yoz- it was okay...u rote 2 much but barely had punches with strong impact....u got to work on them and add effort into them....and work a bit on your flow....
punhces: yo wat^
flow: yo wat ^
structure: yozlyricalkilla
overall- yo wat ^....wen i get all mah posts....jus pm me the battle...i need a little left
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114144

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