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Old 02-14-04, 02:47 PM   #5
Brethren
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Punches: Smiley, def, the Prime Ape line was nice, the menstruation line was your best line. Master had some alright punches, but not enough. He had about 2 good ones.
Wordplay: Smiley, the the blood/red line, I thought that was dope
Multis: Smiley, had about 3-5 syllables per line
Personals: Neither, nobody had any personals
Opener: Tie, both openers were pretty weak
Closer: Tie, both closer's pretty dope.

Vote - Smiley

Good battle, Smiley's stuff was just better, then multis are tight. Rap Master's stuff was pretty decent also, just keep doing what you do.

you claim your a "blood" but only time you see "red" is during your MENESTRATION PERIODS
Smiley's best line

Your elevating? Going through the sediments of the evident,
Your style's like camera film cos you need to take time to develop it
Rap's best bar

Return the favor in my battle with Rule
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